the third line doesn't,
it's got one too many syllables in.
maybe if it was 'coz when young Mary took a shit'.
(what am I saying...)
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maybe if it was 'coz when young Mary took a shit'.
(what am I saying...)
Dr Phil's right.
Get rid of the 'had a' bit and it should scan.
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