It does scan!
What are you talking about woman?
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Lumpbucket tekcubpmuL,
Wed 5 Jun 2002, 12:54,
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the third line doesn't,
it's got one too many syllables in.
maybe if it was "coz when young Mary took a shit".
(what am I saying...)
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Dr Phil Kitten,
Wed 5 Jun 2002, 12:55,
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Dr Phil's right.
Get rid of the 'had a' bit and it should scan.
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bovine I'm so old, even my old is old,
Wed 5 Jun 2002, 12:59,
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Nope.
*crosses arms and looks away*
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Lumpbucket tekcubpmuL,
Wed 5 Jun 2002, 13:07,
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Well
if you're going to be childish about a bit of constrictive criticism.
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bovine I'm so old, even my old is old,
Wed 5 Jun 2002, 13:10,
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Well
At least I dont smell of wee, like you.
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bovine I'm so old, even my old is old,
Wed 5 Jun 2002, 13:20,
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Monty P
Mary had a little lamb
and it was always grunting
she tied to a five bar gate
and kicked it's little cunt in
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thebear is thebear,
Wed 5 Jun 2002, 13:22,
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